People

[irwin]

This is my new song production up for Critique, it is entitled "People" (style) pop/dance
https://www.boomplay.com/songs/137078710?from=artists

[crashgates]

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[JuanMacias]

Hi Irwin

It needs a lot more work in production and sound engineering in order to sound professional. Currently it sounds too repetitive, midi driven and audio quality is too low.
maybe you could look into tutorials on how to produce High quality songs. go to beat academy channel on youtube, they have good tutorials where they show all the production process of a song.


Juan

[Paulie]

In today's world, you never know what becomes successful. The Casio keyboard accompiment instantly reminded me of one of Clairo's first viral track.

You never know.

[irwin]

Well its a start, but feel it still needs a bit more elbow grease

Thank you for the encouragement

[boinkeee2000]

hmmm . . . it is very interesting

imo if you are going for an eclectic, avante garde, indie-garage type track this would definitely fit that outsiderish sub-genre....

but since you mentioned dance/Pop, you may need to re-evaluate this track from the ground up, begin by researching current dance/pop tracks in youtube as a starting point, and get a sense on what is different with their composition/production compared to yours. wish you luck on your journey

[Casey H]

...going for an eclectic, avante garde, indie-garage type track...

That's my new story and I'm sticking to it!!

Sorry Irwin, this track is too far from commercially viable to comment on. Others can be more specific. Wish you the best.

Casey

[irwin]

Hi Irwin

It needs a lot more work in production and sound engineering in order to sound professional.

Juan

Hi Juan, Thanks for taking the time to reply to my post Your input I very much appreciate.
Have to step up with my production.

[irwin]

In today's world, you never know what becomes successful. The Casio keyboard accompiment instantly reminded me of one of Clairo's first viral track.

You never know.

Hi Paulie, indeed (You never know) Thanks for listening and for taking the time to leave a comment. Much appreciated.

Irwin

[CTWF]

This is my new song production up for Critique, it is entitled "People" (style) pop/dance
https://www.boomplay.com/songs/137078710?from=artists

Hi Irwin

The same comments I made on pretty much each of your songs over the past 5(?) years apply again.

Best wishes,
Tom