please review/advise

[k o star]

hi Adam,Nice song... Personally I would like more variation on the drums so yes, live drums or "real" drums software would be cool...I would also like to feel more bass in the song... Production needs a little more work... on bringing up the bass feel that is...Ur voice is fine... though might need a little tweaking on minor areas... a little pitchy at parts...Cool style U got... keep up the good work.-Kel

[gburgess]

Adam,Nice lyrics and melody. The vocalist did a nice job as well. If you have the individual tracks, I'm wondering if you could build around the vocalist.GB

[adamstrings]

Thanks to all for keeping the comments coming!K.O.-this demo was done straight up-me on vox, and no auto tuning!! I'm a bassist, and no real bass line to speak of...I'd love to hear from you/anyone out there what style/performer I should angle this towards. I think that's where i really need the input at this point. Gburgess-thanks for the complement on my vox. That said, I may want to try a heavier sounding "rock" voice. Again, if I'm aiming for a taxi forward and i guess it's pop rock. But patterned after...Daughtry, Archuleta, or who?