My niece is writing her first song

[suzdoyle]

Jun 5, 2009, 1:33am, davekershaw wrote:Jun 4, 2009, 8:38am, suzdoyle wrote:babbling and dithering . . . pontificating prolifically So when the cat has got your tongue, there's no need for dismay!Just summon up these words and then you've got a lot to say! Your advice is very solidNothing there that's squalidWhen my words are the crapperI'll just learn to be a RAPPER! ,Suz

[davekershaw]

Jun 5, 2009, 10:41am, suzdoyle wrote:Your advice is very solidNothing there that's squalidWhen my words are the crapperI'll just learn to be a RAPPER!A rapper, yeah that's dapper,a crapper's not so good,a tapper or a yapper,hey, a lapper if you could!But hey this is young Paul's thread,a piece about his niece,a song is in the pipeline,and he's calling the police!

[feaker]

Ok you two.Wanna write for me?Very entertaining, I see a new direction for this thread:)Love ya bothPaul

[davekershaw]

Jun 6, 2009, 9:22am, feaker wrote:Ok you two.Wanna write for me?Very entertaining, I see a new direction for this thread:)Love ya bothPaulLooks like we're forgiven Suz,Paul's sent the cops away,You can sort Sam's vocals out,The words are underway.A little less vibrato,Not so much Broadway,I'll try and get some lines knocked out,for later on today!

[feaker]

DaveWe'll try today to change her singIt really ain't any easy thing.Suz and Dave they are a waitinMan this can be frus ter ate in

[suzdoyle]

(chortling in glee)Nothing much to addon this rainy northwest dayAm loving all these clever wordsand snappy repartee! SuzBTW, here's a link to info on Claude Stein, and the Natural Singer workshops:http://claudestein.com/site/?page_id=3

[davekershaw]

A snappy repartee she says,now that's a pretty phrase,And Paul's a wit, he's said his bit,and set this thread ablaze!