Critique Please?

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So, Mark, do you like the reverb? {;-)The guitars and vocal are well recorded and performed. As was mentioned, there isn't much of a hook, but this could work as singer/songerwriter. One minor problem, though, is the song has a fairly rhythmic pulse and the guitars are being forced to hold this pulse throughout...using the same strum pattern...song is fairly long...not much dynamics...might need drums and/or bass just for this reason.Vince