Feedback please: "Real Cowboys"

[heinsite]

hi jonathan--i'll just say that this swings and the music is damned good--BUT listen to Claire--she is damned good, and IMHO right on with her lyric comments--they have to be friggin' PERFECT for c/w...and that is NOT easy....but you've got the music down and DAMN well done IMHO..all the best,warren

[jonathanm]

Thanks for the music kudos, Warren.Claire's comments figured pretty heavily into the re-write, and I'm hoping the lyrics stand up better now. She knows her stuff, for sure, and it's just nice to have her and the rest of the crew to take a look at stuff like this. Are you concerned that the lyrics still are a bit unclear?Thanks again, man.

[threefaces]

Jonathan,Country is not something I listen to a lot - but I can hear a great song here. I really like the vocalist too! I see there's a debate about some of the lyrics, but for me the 'forced' lines like "genuine" are absolutely superb. I think you've done really well to include that kind of line. It helps elevate the song out of the run of the mill.Good luck with the song,Rob.

[jonathanm]

Thanks 3.Shoot, outchere 'n Podunk, Oklahoma, we say gen-u-ine all th' time. The vocalist is a friend of a friend. She's a high school senior, and her voice seems to get better and stronger every year. I'll pass along the kudos.