Fear of Self - 3 song critiques

[rivercitymusic]

Voice needs to be brought to the front, clearer.Intro is good but it's too massive, maybe start off and build quickly but in your face so fast?Other than that, being hard rock, you gotta produce a better demo. how many tracks did you use, can you re-use any, all, ?You can scrub it up pretty easily if you can still work on the individual tracks.Doc

[christophersclaybo]

Calling out to no replyfrom empty breathinside of walls revolving.Endless pacing.Bitter cold.Am I the last to know?I tell you what would add a little dynamic. I'd've LOVED for you to sing that word "know" in really high and long, like "Am I the last to KNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW?!" I'm thinking that would sound KICK-ASS!!!!I really like your song! I think I'm gonna have to listen to it one more time!

[mistydawn]

Hi guys I have eclectic taste and I love metal You're looking for feedback......My opinion will differ than most on the board, I like the vocalist a lot- he has great potential, and I realize the circumstances of the recording.What you especially have to watch out for (and the killer of a solid following or vocal recognition in media) is the stylistic approach of the vocalist to each song.Obviously, he sings well in many different styles! In all three songs he was different.I was expecting an "Alice" feel on every song and that certainly was not what I got.If he could tie in all his sounds in each recording, then his style (and identity in music) will be solid. And that is a great way to sell yourself, you will be memorable Another thing about studios......When anyone makes an album it costs a pretty penny (unless you do it yourself).No matter how close (or not) you are with the person who is mastering, you still have to be able to critique their work!!!!!!!!!!!!!I can't stress that enough.If you feel that its not up to par, say so. If they don't agree, then walk away.Its your money.And your paying for great sound. The demand is too high for crisp, like a concert sound, and if your paying for it- you better get it.The critiques you received were awesome...The lyrics are awesome...In fact, my score wasn't that high on a critique....but my songs still got forwarded. It's all about perfectly matching the listing. Another thing I can't stress enough.You must meet all points on a listing. Not just some. All.That's it Good Luck and Happy Hunting,M