Someone to make comments on my song?

[Alexander]

It´s in a working tape state. I welcome merciless and straight opinion. Intended for female singer.
Thanks in advance.
Sasha

[orest]

Hi there Alexander! What a lovely name:)

The song sounded very 80's to me, but that might be your intention?
The vocals were a little low in the beginning, but if you're going to re-record them with a female voice it won't be a problem.
The bass part played on the keyboard should be in the middle, not to the left, that makes the mix unbalanced.

I like it, you might be able to place it in a TV-show or a movie.

[BobbySwift]

Hi Alexander,

I agree the keyboard kind of over powers the vocals but the overall sound of the song has good potential for TV like WB network. I am no music pro but my feet were a tappin and head tippin to the beat. Good luck and take care,
Bobby