It´s in a working tape state. I welcome merciless and straight opinion. Intended for female singer.
Thanks in advance.
Sasha
Someone to make comments on my song?
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Someone to make comments on my song?
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Re: Someone to make comments on my song?
Hi there Alexander! What a lovely name:)
The song sounded very 80's to me, but that might be your intention?
The vocals were a little low in the beginning, but if you're going to re-record them with a female voice it won't be a problem.
The bass part played on the keyboard should be in the middle, not to the left, that makes the mix unbalanced.
I like it, you might be able to place it in a TV-show or a movie.
The song sounded very 80's to me, but that might be your intention?
The vocals were a little low in the beginning, but if you're going to re-record them with a female voice it won't be a problem.
The bass part played on the keyboard should be in the middle, not to the left, that makes the mix unbalanced.
I like it, you might be able to place it in a TV-show or a movie.
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Re: Someone to make comments on my song?
Hi Alexander,
I agree the keyboard kind of over powers the vocals but the overall sound of the song has good potential for TV like WB network. I am no music pro but my feet were a tappin and head tippin to the beat. Good luck and take care,
Bobby
I agree the keyboard kind of over powers the vocals but the overall sound of the song has good potential for TV like WB network. I am no music pro but my feet were a tappin and head tippin to the beat. Good luck and take care,
Bobby
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