Sharing my NEW WEBSITE! - thoughts welcomed!

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Re: Sharing my NEW WEBSITE! - thoughts welcomed!

Post by Len911 » Tue Aug 23, 2011 3:47 pm

Vincent, I think it is a really nice classy looking and uncluttered website. I would like to see a picture of you on the front, facing forward, looking down, away or up with your hands folded in prayer(just kidding on the last one),lol! The introduction is a little wordy and could probably be edited, but that would make room for the picture. This is an example of what I would prefer to see if I was browsing website introductions;

Welcome to Vincent Pace Music Productions. Providing affordable, custom, high quality music for media projects and productions. Detailed and dedicated craftsmanship. Satisfaction guaranteed.
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Re: Sharing my NEW WEBSITE! - thoughts welcomed!

Post by onelight24 » Wed Aug 24, 2011 12:36 pm

Hi Steve and Len, thanks for sharing your thoughts!

Hey Len, I think I'll borrow your concise approach to the home page description, makes sense!

Steve, I suppose at the moment the intent is to get the site up and running, as a well polished business card. Perhaps in the future, as you mention, that will change!

Thanks again to both of you! :)

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Re: Sharing my NEW WEBSITE! - thoughts welcomed!

Post by GMDmusic » Thu Sep 22, 2011 5:32 pm

Just a thought,

How 'bout if we also critique "each others" websites?

It's been a while since I've received any input on mine. Let me know if you like the idea.

I'm at http://www.GeorgeMichaelDile.com

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