Vincent, I think it is a really nice classy looking and uncluttered website. I would like to see a picture of you on the front, facing forward, looking down, away or up with your hands folded in prayer(just kidding on the last one),lol! The introduction is a little wordy and could probably be edited, but that would make room for the picture. This is an example of what I would prefer to see if I was browsing website introductions;
Welcome to Vincent Pace Music Productions. Providing affordable, custom, high quality music for media projects and productions. Detailed and dedicated craftsmanship. Satisfaction guaranteed.
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Re: Sharing my NEW WEBSITE! - thoughts welcomed!
Hi Steve and Len, thanks for sharing your thoughts!
Hey Len, I think I'll borrow your concise approach to the home page description, makes sense!
Steve, I suppose at the moment the intent is to get the site up and running, as a well polished business card. Perhaps in the future, as you mention, that will change!
Thanks again to both of you!
Cheers,
Vincent!
Hey Len, I think I'll borrow your concise approach to the home page description, makes sense!
Steve, I suppose at the moment the intent is to get the site up and running, as a well polished business card. Perhaps in the future, as you mention, that will change!
Thanks again to both of you!

Cheers,
Vincent!
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Re: Sharing my NEW WEBSITE! - thoughts welcomed!
Just a thought,
How 'bout if we also critique "each others" websites?
It's been a while since I've received any input on mine. Let me know if you like the idea.
I'm at http://www.GeorgeMichaelDile.com
How 'bout if we also critique "each others" websites?
It's been a while since I've received any input on mine. Let me know if you like the idea.
I'm at http://www.GeorgeMichaelDile.com
God bless,
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