I think you're right though, it really deserves a full orchestration and later it could be pitched for something more developed.
And - even though the piece is "really getting on my nerves" just about now, ha ha
after I think 6 re-mixes, I think it's as good as it's gonna get tonight.
I am so grateful for all your and others' wonderful feed back and really brilliant suggestions.
I try to soak up as much knowledge as possible and this is a great place to do that.
Hopefully even if a return, I'll get some key points from the screener to modify it for the next similar pitch.
