Anyone interested in giving me a critique

[irthlingz]

I'm going to stick my neck out and suggest that for the last lines, this translation might better convey the sense of what you're trying to get across:

"My look back reveals many blessings, many blessings."

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Michael

[Picardster]

I'm going to stick my neck out and suggest that for the last lines, this translation might better convey the sense of what you're trying to get across:

"My look back reveals many blessings, many blessings."

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Michael

well sticked-out, Michael
Cheers for that