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Sweet Georgia Brown

Post by Stubee » Mon Jul 11, 2022 11:09 pm

https://www.taxi.com/members/V2G7ZzSiTs ... rgia-brown

Any feedback would be much appreciated.

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Re: Sweet Georgia Brown

Post by irthlingz » Tue Jul 12, 2022 7:30 pm

Hi Stu -

I think that your version is musically too far from the Brother Bones version. Needs to be cleaner, sparser. Also, the listing specifically asks for "lyrical vocals found in the Isaham Jones & His Orchestra version". You include lyrics that are not in that version: "All those tips etc." In short, I think you'd need to be closer to the references, lyrically and musically.

Finally, it's good to copy and past the listing into your post, ideally with live links to the references; makes it easier for people to respond.

Wishing you best of luck with this if you continue to work on it!

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Re: Sweet Georgia Brown

Post by Stubee » Tue Jul 12, 2022 10:16 pm

Thank you, Michael. Much appreciated.

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