I''ve not heard it before but listening quickly , it introduces an electric slide guitar that's not in the previous section and it sounds like the picked acoustic part from the verse gets more intesne or maybe they added another instrument
Don't bore us with your crappy chorus
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This type of thing is not about production & arrangement, though they put sparkle on it. It's about melody and associated sectional contrast. Pure songwriting.cosmicdolphin wrote: ↑Wed Apr 30, 2025 3:15 pmI''ve not heard it before but listening quickly , it introduces an electric slide guitar that's not in the previous section and it sounds like the picked acoustic part from the verse gets more intesne or maybe they added another instrument
I think Joe's song is a darn good one. It just may be an "8.5" when this listing needed a "10". That's all.

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Thanks, Casey, I'll keep plugging and plodding awayCasey H wrote: ↑Wed Apr 30, 2025 6:33 pmThis type of thing is not about production & arrangement, though they put sparkle on it. It's about melody and associated sectional contrast. Pure songwriting.cosmicdolphin wrote: ↑Wed Apr 30, 2025 3:15 pmI''ve not heard it before but listening quickly , it introduces an electric slide guitar that's not in the previous section and it sounds like the picked acoustic part from the verse gets more intesne or maybe they added another instrument
I think Joe's song is a darn good one. It just may be an "8.5" when this listing needed a "10". That's all.![]()
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Hey Joe
The song sounds great. You said you have had many forwards. Sometimes it is just a matter of timing. It has all the ingredients to make a good country stew and I think that all you need is to have the right situation to meet this song. If there was a scene where a single Mom taking care of her kids and doing the best she can for them enduring hardship etc. then this would fit like a glove. Move on and write another one.
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The song sounds great. You said you have had many forwards. Sometimes it is just a matter of timing. It has all the ingredients to make a good country stew and I think that all you need is to have the right situation to meet this song. If there was a scene where a single Mom taking care of her kids and doing the best she can for them enduring hardship etc. then this would fit like a glove. Move on and write another one.
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