thanks everyone for taking the time))

[joeymurillo]

I have one answer for you..Go F^ck ..self..I have been a memeber for less then a yr jerkoff..Work with other writers on here who enjoy working with me..The whole summer I've been taking care of my son..So Mr.. Know it all before you judge someone take a look at your self..Ass..le

[joeymurillo]

and the original title was to be funny so go buy a sense of humor..you need one..

[joeymurillo]

I dont got time for you..Think what you want. I really dont care..Your such a pain in the ass.. Go make music do something..Your 63 your profile says ..Again what I told you I stand by it.. Again any honest opinions out there I'll put it back just for you...Now go away your annoying and rude

[hummingbird]

Okay you two, cool it.

[roycooper]

Hey.. I like this song... very good on my ears and I kept listening to the end..Roy..ps. I can't give opinions on tec stuff to do with music as I am not a musician.. I write lyrics... I just know what I like ...

[joeymurillo]

thanks roy and ok hummingbird))

[fullbirdmusic]

+1 on the vocals being panned. I would make them more dry as well. Sounds like it's got some flanger...? Makings for a decent song here, just make sure the vocals are clear.The breakdown would be cool if it gradually slowed down to the shuffle. The way it is - there's a pause, then it comes in a bit choppy - either omit or have it gradually slow. That might be a cool effect if it's done right. Otherwise, the songs does well with instrumentation and melody. Keep it up!