What style would this be

[Stein Thor]

thank you all for your comments,,, they are very helpful

professional singer is a must I think yes, all my songs are just done at home and I don´t have access to a lot of musicians... however getting someone to sing them is something I need to think about seriously

[t4mh]

I think this track would benefit mostly from using a really good piano voice instead of the Wurly. I think it would have greater appeal to more people, just my opinion. I don't have a problem with any melodic content but I did have a problem feeling a meter through much of the track. There isn't much in the way of dynamics and the track is almost begging for it. Get softer, get louder, expression! I don't do lyrics and singing, so I won't comment on any of that.

Good Luck!
Keith