New Song -- Your critiques please!

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Re: New Song -- Your critiques please!

Post by djdale » Fri Dec 12, 2008 4:20 am

Good country song there, Andy.verses sounds a little familiar, but I can't think of the song it sounds like, so until I do.... SAFE!!Tracy Lawrence song melody maybe?I agree from above that the title was repeated ju st a tad too much for my taste, but who am I? Tweak it and It'll be there.Dale
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Re: New Song -- Your critiques please!

Post by christophersclaybo » Mon Dec 15, 2008 8:57 pm

EXCELLENT smooth country song!Vocals are AWESOME!The hook is THERE, dude!My only thought is to make the music a tad bit more forceful in your choruses. You want your choruses to reach out and GRBA the listener AND NOT LET GO!!!

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Re: New Song -- Your critiques please!

Post by putter232000 » Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:30 am

Thanks to all! ANYMORE CRITIQUES OUT THERE??? DON'T BE SHY!!Andy

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Re: New Song -- Your critiques please!

Post by Pinkstar » Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:43 am

Excellent job! It sounds like something I hear on the radio. Catchy chorus. I think it's great the way it us, if anything, maybe build the last chorus a bit more and don't fade it out? Great job! J

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Re: New Song -- Your critiques please!

Post by toddt » Wed Dec 17, 2008 1:18 pm

I'm not a country person so I'll refrain from trying to add value here, but IMO that's an impressive song.I can definitely picture that in a movie.Well done.

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Re: New Song -- Your critiques please!

Post by heinsite » Wed Dec 17, 2008 6:35 pm

hey putter!!i'm with misty on this one, a perfect blend of those 3--and because of that, i think it has an excellent shot at actually being forwarded and jumping over that "high bar" thing taxi believes in....it is splendid all the way around--the ONLY thing if i'm to pick it out, is that it seemed just a tad too long for radio play, but i may be dead wrong..again, just friggin splendid--and yes, it does sound familiar--like about 80% of the tunes on c/w radio today!! and that IMHO my friend, is NOT a bad thing...just the way it is...all the best,warren

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Re: New Song -- Your critiques please!

Post by kitz » Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:07 pm

Really Nice!! Lyrics are there!! Acoustic solo may need some fattening up in the eq - it sounds a bit thin on this end - and maybe needs a tiny bit more reverb. Distortion on elec is a bit distracting as stated above. So much good about this tune!!Kitz

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Re: New Song -- Your critiques please!

Post by putter232000 » Sun Dec 21, 2008 2:36 pm

Thanks all! ANY MORE??

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Re: New Song -- Your critiques please!

Post by claire » Sun Dec 21, 2008 2:48 pm

Sounds good, Andy. Jason did a great job and Ron is always top notch. Good luck with it.Claire

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Re: New Song -- Your critiques please!

Post by billg » Sun Dec 21, 2008 3:54 pm

Sounds really good to me, good song & good production. One nit . . . electric guitar (right channel) should come up to it's "after the solo level" imo. but you know what? It wouldn't really matter if it didn't cause it's still good.

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