rough rock demo.. I will finish this

[feaker]

Turned my amp to a setting called rectified last night and started bouncing between E and G chords. Sounded like heavy metal or maybe head banging. Went on only 50 seconds and then tried to decide to can it or start actually making a project out of it?I hate to put a lot of time in on this if it has no appeal or chance to find a home. Don't know if new rock stuff is even out there? I only have a couple hours into it so far. Now would be a good time to find out.Takes 50 seconds if you have the time.New...added a lead guitar 10/9ThanksPlease visit my site. The song is "rectified2"http://www.taxi.com/feaker Paul

[davekershaw]

Hey Paul,Had a bad day then did yer!I liked it!Dave.

[geo]

I'll see your .50 and raise you 5:00 Hey..... like the laid back jazzy feel on the vocal.... I hear that as the treatment.... keep the rectified ( ) guitar just make the drums shuffle more.... dirty blues.... that's it...Check out this tune by Jazz Stan.... kinda got that dirty blues thing going on..... though a little faster... http://taxi.proboards27.com/index.cgi?b ... d=9808Good start...Peace, Geo

[feaker]

DaveThe tune sounded dark, so I induldged.GeoJust had a listen. Think I might be able to find some drums. Lead guitar is going to be fun with this one.Got the tempo at 85. That is pretty low. Just learned how to copy a few drum fills and use them. Learning curve very slow here.As us "yoopers" of upper Michigan would say, " thank you's guys for your thoughts"Paul

[ce77]

I feel as a Neil Young sounds alike Good start.. G.

[feaker]

GHmmmm. Can't sing as high or as good, but thanks.If things stay positive, might continue with this baby.ThanksPaul

[heinsite]

good start paul--hell nowadays (and disrespect to one of my heroes, neil--or you for that matter...) but your voice is just fine here IMHO.keep going,the best to you,warren

[feaker]

warrenIt sounded pretty cool when I first did it and then was not as appealing after.Can't pull it off or I would.First time I ever had no imagination for a new song. Grabbed at straws here.Good to hear from you:)Paul

[billg]

sounds like retro "grunge" a bit to me. I say it's a keeper and you should work on it. (insert whip-cracking sound here)

[feaker]

billThere is so much crap out there that makes the charts. Thought I might contribute.Only thing missing are angry screaming lyrics. Why did I even want to go there, who knows:)Thanks for your 2 ctsPaul