YOU NEVER LEAVE - Wrap Up?

[matthoggard]

Apr 29, 2009, 10:03am, momof4 wrote:hey! great job staying at this one - i'm impressed! and i have to say that i really like this song. i reaaaally dig the lyrics. seems kind of reminiscient of "Better As a Memory" - written in similiar, poetic style. one tiny comment is that the bridge doesn't seem to really do justice to the rest of the song...seems kind of like a generic bridge that would work in about a million other tunes. if you can keep on with the emotion you've displayed in the rest of the song and really "bring it home" in the bridge, i think it'd be stronger. but apart from that, i love your imagery, love the desperation, love it all. nice job, andrew!erin (now "momofFIVE[/font]")Congrats Erin!!!M~

[momof4]

thanks, matt! (sorry to hijack...)

[jwebbinspired]

Hey Erin, good to hear from you! Congrats, and you are welcome to hi-jack any of my threads if it has to do with a new addition to your family Thanks for chiming in. I'm glad you commented on the bridge, because I have never been happy with the bridge. Do you think it is good melodically and the problem is the lyrics? Or the other way around, or both? lolAndy

[gburgess]

Andy,Great song. I really like both the lyrics and the melody.With a little help from our Friend, this bird may fly!Sorry I did not comment sooner. I've been away from the forum for about a month and a half. GB

[jwebbinspired]

Thank you very much for checking this out GB, I'm glad you like it. I'm hopeful this flies. It's outta my hands for sure, all I can do is present it well and pray. Thanks everybody for the input!Andy